Message-ID: <15583153.1075859550804.JavaMail.evans@thyme> Date: Mon, 28 Feb 2000 00:53:00 -0800 (PST) From: elizabeth.sager@enron.com To: christi.nicolay@enron.com Subject: joe's comments on earlier draft Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-From: Elizabeth Sager X-To: Christi L Nicolay X-cc: X-bcc: X-Folder: \Elizabeth_Sager_Dec2000\Notes Folders\Sent X-Origin: Sager-E X-FileName: esager.nsf ---------------------- Forwarded by Elizabeth Sager/HOU/ECT on 02/28/2000 08:51 AM --------------------------- Joe Hartsoe@ENRON 02/25/2000 07:49 AM To: Elizabeth Sager/HOU/ECT@ECT cc: jhartso@enron. com Subject: Re: Draft of EPMI Response Letter to TVA Elizabeth -- This letter is excellent. Attached I added several suggestions. Primarily, I suggest adding to the begining paragraph a few words and a sentence to put into perspective what is going on for the quick reader. Also, on the mention of FERC, I suggested a ( ) to place into context and lighten the sting. Lastly, when you use "Commercial" I suggest using "commercially reasonable" if that would be the ultimate standard applied. Just suggestions -- use as you like. Later JOE Elizabeth Sager@ECT 02/24/2000 03:36 PM To: James B Fallon/HOU/ECT@ECT, Mark Palmer/Corp/Enron@ENRON, Steven J Kean/HOU/EES@EES, Richard Shapiro/HOU/EES@EES, Joe Hartsoe/Corp/Enron@ENRON, Cynthia Sandherr/Corp/Enron@ENRON cc: Kevin M Presto/HOU/ECT@ECT, Christi L Nicolay/HOU/ECT@ECT, Bill Rust/HOU/ECT@ECT Subject: Draft of EPMI Response Letter to TVA At the request of Christi, enclosed please find a revised draft of EPMI's response to TVA's recent letter concerning EPMI's transmission requests. This letter has been revised from the earlier draft to reflect comments from Kevin and me. I will call Bill Rust and read the letter to him after all revisions have been made. Please let me know if you have any comments. We would like to get the letter out to TVA as soon as possible, preferably this afternoon if possible Thanks Elizabeth 36349