Message-ID: <19760764.1075860069401.JavaMail.evans@thyme> Date: Wed, 1 Mar 2000 11:52:00 -0800 (PST) From: mark.taylor@enron.com To: edmund.cooper@enron.com Subject: EOL Credit Derivatives - Long Descriptions Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-From: Mark Taylor X-To: Edmund Cooper X-cc: X-bcc: X-Folder: \Mark_Taylor _Dec_2000\Notes Folders\Sent X-Origin: Taylor-M X-FileName: mtaylor.nsf Edmund - I have reviewed the long descriptions I was given for the credit derivatives (I can't tell if they are current) and have substantial comments - I have attached what I have come up with (sorry it's in 2 pieces). Basically I don't think we should be restating something in the Long Description that is already covered (sometimes with different language) in the GTC - this only creates an ambiguity and is not necessary to form a complete contract. My other concern - and I have not been able to draft language to fix it - is that I can't find any definition of the Seller Payment amount and I don't think the Buyer Payment language works - can you give me a call so we can discuss my concerns?